Gallery

Oct. 24th, 2009 10:38 pm
ladybirdcarina: (kyusaeng-rest)
[personal profile] ladybirdcarina
Title:Gallery
Pairing:kyusaeng
Rating:PG
Disclaimer:I don't own SS501...just a could CDs and posters...XD
Summary::"You're just another priceless work of art in his gallery..."


This fic was inspired by the song Gallery by Mario Vazquez. Please listen to the song HERE while you read. It's written to fit the song for the most part. You'll need to open in a separate tab.





God broke the mold,
When he made this one I know
She's breathtaking but so much more
She walks in the room, your lungs close
Making you never want to breathe again
Her boyfriend has got so much dough
So much ice his neck and wrist froze
Is he faithful to her? Hell no
But she chose to be with him, shorty


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Never before had I seen such a stunning creature.

It had been at a similar exhibit to the one I was currently attending that I had laid eyes on you for the first time. Long raven hair brushed a delicate collarbone and near ebony eyes took in the area. Your small frame was dressed in a pair of dark denim jeans and fitted black dress shirt that was exquisite against milky skin.

Everything about you stole the very air from my lungs.

The possessive arm wrapped around your slender waist drew my attention to the person beside you. My eyes narrowed as I took in the man's appearance. Where your beauty spoke of simple elegance, the man screamed 'player'. From the overabundance of jewelery, he was a man of wealth who was not shy about letting the world know. The way his eyes worked their ways up and down passing patrons spoke more of infidelity than a thousand words ever could.

It made me wonder how such a man had managed to possess a date as entrancing as you.

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Tell me is the money worth your soul?
Tell me what's the reason that you hold on
When you know that dude has a whole wall of 'em just like you?
And girl you're just way too fine
Gotta be treated as one of a kind
Girl use your mind
Don't be just another dime

Because


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We met when he left to speak with one of the patrons interested in buying one of his paintings. You shyly returned my bow with one of your own and after giving my own name, you responded quietly with yours.

YoungSaeng.

I quietly spoke the name aloud, enjoying the feel of the name rolling off my tongue. Upon meeting your gaze, you had been doing the same with mine. While waiting for your lover to return, we spoke of whatever came to mind.

You're an up and coming singer. Moving here on your own with only the clothes on your back, you and he met up by happenstance. A short time later, he had offered the small but cozy spare room in his apartment where you stayed for a month before moving into his large master bedroom by his side.

I looked over your shoulder as the man continued to speak with the woman, but chose not to mention the hand slipping up her short dress from under the table. I didn't need to...not when you already knew.

I was simply unable to fathom how someone could treat one so precious as if they were merely pretty baubles to simply draw the eye, as he seemed to be doing to you. The fact that the bastard was so good at what he did saddened me, especially when your gentle smile barely faltered as you assumed what it was that I was witnessing.

You didn't deserve it.

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I can't take
Seeing you with him
'Cause I know exactly what you'll be,
In his gallery
Just not fair
And it's tearing me apart
You're just another priceless work of art
In his gallery


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That was simply the first of many meetings. I joined the art world simply to watch you and make sure that you were alright. No matter how often I saw you, you always smiled, quietly asking, "How are you tonight, KyuJong-sshi?"

We'd converse until that man approached, robbing you of your smile and making me cringe as I watched you become as lifeless as the picture behind you. It wasn't fair, and it hurt more than it truly should.

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She's so confused
She knows she deserves more
Someone who will love and adore
But his money's hard to ignore
She really doesn't know what to do
Girl it's just a matter of time
Before he finds another more fine
After he's done dulling your shine
You're out the door and he's through with you


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I know in my heart that you were aware that you deserved more, though I couldn't for the life of me understand why you stayed. Was it because you loved him so much? Or maybe you had nowhere else to go. If that was the reason-you couldn't afford anything-I would gladly take you in, if just to bring back that beautiful smile.

As I watched your eyes dull more and more every time I saw you, I tried to beg. I pleaded with my eyes that you see and run. Get away from him before he kills that light that's hidden in your eyes.

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You're a masterpiece
I know that he
Can't appreciate your beauty
Don't let him cheapen you
He don't see you like i do
Beautiful not just for show
Time that someone let you know


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It was the biggest show of the year, yet the artist showed up alone. Worried, I walked out of the hall, only to see you seated on the lobby's bench, staring up at the painting prominently displayed on the off-white wall. Walking over to you, I took a seat.

After a moment, you leaned over, resting your head against my shoulder. No words were spoken, yet all of the feelings were easily conveyed. You are too precious for the likes of him. He doesn't understand that you are to be treasured, not displayed.

Slowly, I take your hand in mine and smile when you return the gesture.

You are the most beautiful work of art.

A masterpiece of the finest quality.

One I shall cherish for as long as you'll allow me, and even longer.

Date: 2009-10-25 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yeonah.livejournal.com
SPOT SPOT SPOT SPOT /CLINGSSSS

Date: 2009-10-25 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yeonah.livejournal.com
T__________________T

THIS WAS SO SAAAAAAD AND SO MUCH WIN~~~~

I'm so glad Kyu's there for Saengie, Saengie really deserves so much more than that jerk.

KyuSaeng's so cute~~~, don't worry Saeng, Kyu will bring the smile back to your face~

Great writing unnie~~~

Date: 2009-10-25 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
I'm glad that you liked it!~!!!

It was hard to write, let me tell you...hehehehe

Kyu's totally gonna worship Saeng and treat him as he should be treated

Date: 2009-10-25 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitkii.livejournal.com
okay im going to hope it works and doesnt not send this because i have no idea. my internet is being tempermental and stupid.

This was really sweet. I like the description about the way YoungSaeng's eyes became a little more dull each time. The last time I was sort of expecting him to have died when he didn't show up but the ending was far more sweet than that.

It was still sad though, glad Kyujong could help. I'm a sucker for stories with an artistic setting like this, so that was an added bonus. I like that you let the story tell itself instead of use dialogue to tell the reader like you do a lot of the time.

Thanks for writing carey, lets hope this comment sends. write more like this
Edited Date: 2009-10-25 03:20 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-10-25 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
I can try to...I'm slowly trying to write more of these with less dialogue, but I've been writing play format, as you know, since I was young, so it's a hard habit to break...hehehe

I'm glad that you liked it, and ily~!!!

Date: 2009-10-25 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitkii.livejournal.com
maybe your problem is that you block your mind by saying 'its hard and i can't do this' instead of 'i want to write this way'.

ily2. <3

Date: 2009-10-25 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mi-iseul.livejournal.com
*goes to read*

I kept waiting for Youngsaeng to break, but at the end, it was so sweet, the way Kyujong managed to get to him in time, to show him that it didn't have to be like that.

The last three lines just....wow. The essence of the story right there. <33333

Edited Date: 2009-10-25 03:06 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-10-25 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
I'm glad that it came out like I wanted~!!!! XDDDDDDD

Whenever I hear that song, I always picture him saving her(or him, in this case), so...^___^

Thanks for reading, love~!

Date: 2009-10-25 10:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] volatileflame.livejournal.com
so beautiful Unni! ♥

Date: 2009-10-25 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
Thank you~!!!!!!♥

ps-pretty magazine is pretty~!

Date: 2009-10-25 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sbluesnow.livejournal.com
i don't know what to think of this.

it's good and sweet but it might be a bit too sweet for me right now

so it's sorta a like it, don't like it feeling right now

but osm couple!

Date: 2009-10-25 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
::hugs you tightly::

I understand that, Love~

Thanks for reading, though~!!!

Date: 2009-10-26 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ameliorate23.livejournal.com
omg... I loved it!

I had to read this when you said Kyusaeng. I love them~

haha I actually know a girl named Youngsaeng. She doesn't look anything like the masterpiece you described, though. Like, when KyuJong first saw Youngsaeng, what amazing imagery~ The contrast was real cool, too.

I really liked it. Especially how KyuJong started feeling protective. Like, all the talk about Youngsaeng dying a bit whenever the boyfriend came back. Very nice job, Carey.

Date: 2009-10-26 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
Thanks~!!!

That song...the second I played it, I needed to write a fic about it...

I'm glad that you liked it, and my imagery...::hugs you::

Date: 2009-10-26 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reader-a.livejournal.com
aww. *sighs*
I loved the ending!

Date: 2009-10-26 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
XDDD

YAY for liking it~!!!

::hugs::

Date: 2009-10-26 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miracleshining.livejournal.com
I can't believe I missed this! What a gorgeous, bittersweet and elegant piece of workmanship. Fits the lyrics exquisitely!

Great, great job, Ladybird!

Date: 2009-10-26 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
^___^

Thanks, Love~!!! I'm glad that you liked it!!

:D

The song is just amazing, ne?

Date: 2009-10-26 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jennchii.livejournal.com

The possessive arm wrapped around your slender waist drew my attention to the person beside you. My eyes narrowed as I took in the man's appearance. Where your beauty spoke of simple elegance, the man screamed 'player'. From the overabundance of jewelery, he was a man of wealth who was not shy about letting the world know. The way his eyes worked their ways up and down passing patrons spoke more of infidelity than a thousand words ever could.

OMG akjsaklsjas wow that was stunning!

Date: 2009-10-26 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
Thanks, Jenn~!!!

I'm glad you liked it...

^__^

Date: 2010-01-06 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jajeongsae.livejournal.com
I think I fell in love with the song, this fic and this couple.

I was already liking this pairing but this fic just pushed me into fandom.

*clings to it* I love it as in master of loving it.

Saengie...*slaps stupid man* boo the man.
<.<
^^ Yay Kyu you help Saengie go be cute couple of sad loving win of awesomness.

<3

Date: 2010-01-06 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
This comment is love~!

I'm glad that you liked it~! This was my attempt at wanting to write non-crack for SS~!

Date: 2010-04-09 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ameliorate23.livejournal.com
*pleased sigh*
Just as lovely as the first time I read it.

Date: 2010-04-09 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
and you're just as sweet as you always are~!

Date: 2010-07-14 07:37 pm (UTC)
ext_950078: (Default)
From: [identity profile] sujuhigh.livejournal.com

One I shall cherish for as long as you'll allow me, and even longer.
^yeah those last three words killed me, very very sweet story<3

Date: 2010-07-14 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renichifreak.livejournal.com
^^

thanks, Love~~

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