Kit Kat's Birthday Present!!!::hugs::
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ladybirdcarinaTitle:Two Days With The Domestically Challenged
Pairing:Hanchul, plus ninja yehyuk(couldn't resist it...)
Rating:PG
Warning:Ummm...Heechul fending for himself...?
Summary:Even the most patient of people has a limit...
Disclaimer:...if I did, I would TOTALLY charge admission to Heechul doing half the things he does in this fic...
This is my birthday present for my yedongsaeng Kit Kat!!!...or my Dongsaeng Henry...hehehehe...depending on whether or not I'm rping at the moment...hehehehe...I hope you enjoy this, since it's my first ever hanchul, as well as my first time writing Heechul as a main...hehehehe
He was well known for his calm and gentle nature.
"Hannie, can you grab me a drink while you're in there?"
He was always able to stay calm in any given situation.
"Hannie?"
He was said to have the patience of a saint.
"Did you hear me?"
Nothing affected him.
"Hankyung!"
...but even he had his limits.
The loud slam of the pan startled Yesung and Eunhyuk, who had been too preoccupied with each other to notice the elder man's presence.
"Um, Hyung...?" Yesung tried as Eunhyuk placed a hand over his chest and tried to calm his racing heartbeat. "Are you okay?"
Hankyung wasn't given the chance to answer, as Heechul had apparently grown tired of yelling and opted for the direct approach.
"Didn't you hear me, Hannie?" Heechul asked, hip jutted out and hands on his narrow hips.
"I heard you."
"Then why didn't you answer me? I mean, it's only common courtesy."
Something lit in Hankyung's eyes that had Yesung gulping as he grabbed Eunhyuk's hand and slowly backed them out of the kitchen, Eunhyuk arguing the whole way.
"Courtesy?" the Chinese singer asked. "I'm in here cooking for you like I do everyday. Just a couple hours ago, I had done your laundry. Last night, I was your chauffer. Oh, and last week, I was even your bodyguard, and I'm pretty sure that I'm gonna have a scar from where that girl clawed my arm." Turning completely, Hankyung turned his full attention to Heechul, annoyance clear in his eyes. "I do more for you than I do for myself, so don't you even try to talk about courtesy with me. I doubt you could last two days without me at your beck and call."
The redhead stared at him for a moment before tilting his head in confusion. "You do realize that I don't speak Chinese, right?"
He blinked as he realized that he had been so aggravated that he'd unknowingly slipped into his mother language. Sighing, Hankyung started walking out of the room, but stopped in the doorway. "Shortened version? I'm not your slave. Do it yourself." That said, he walked out, leaving the for once speechless princess behind.
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Within the hour, everyone knew...Heechul was to fend for himself, without Hankyung's help. While the 'strike' startled some, like Leeteuk and Siwon, others such as Kangin, Eunhyuk, and Yesung were highly amused.
"About time, if you ask me, Hyung," Kangin had laughed as soon as he'd heard.
"Hey, Sung, wanna go out to eat?" Eunhyuk asked his lover once he's heard that Heechul was going to cook dinner.
"Traitors, the lot of you!" Heechul shouted as he stormed into the kitchen.
Hankyung simply turned the page of his book, smirk hidden by the pages.
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"Hannie, you have to stop him," Leeteuk begged that night. "I think he's trying to kill us."
"Worse than you?"
"Yes!! I may suck, but Heechul's a menace to society!!! His cooking could be classified as a weapon of mass destruction!"
"It can't be that bad, Teukkie."
Pursing his lips, he shoved the plate he'd carried in right in his face. "I knew you'd say that, so here's the proof. Try it."
"What is it?" the Chinese man asked, looking at the black and brown gelatinous blob on the plate in front of him.
"I have no idea, but I can assure you that he went in there trying to make miyeok guk..."
"...but miyeok guk is soup." He poked at the item on the plate. "It shouldn't be solid."
"It is...I just burn. He decimates."
Hankyung sighed, handing him the dish. "Did anyone eat it?"
"Are you crazy?!" the leader cried. "We don't have death wishes, you know!"
"Give me ten minutes, and I'll make something."
"I'll do it, Hannie Hyung!" Ryeowook chirped from the doorway. "You cook almost every night! Let me."
"You sure?" He nodded happily before running out of the room and into the kitchen, herding the others out.
As Heechul walked out, the 'I told you so' forming on his lips fell at the crestfallen expression that the older singer was trying to hide. Rising from the couch that he was curled up on, he walked over to Heechul and placed a hand on his shoulder.
"How about cooking lessons later on this week?" he asked, smiling reassuringly.
Heechul's lips curled into an ever so slight smile. "Yeah. Good plan."
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Hankyung walked out of his room to see Donghae and Eunhyuk carrying laundry bags toward the door, beanies and sunglasses in place.
"Where are you two going?"
"DBSK dorms," the pair stated.
"Why? We have a perfectly good washer and dryer here."
"Had," Donghae corrected.
"Had?"
"Had," Eunhyuk confirmed.
"Heechul?"
"Heechul."
He sighed. "See you in a bit."
Once the door closed, Hankyung went in search of Heechul, planning on showing him the ins and outs of working a washer and dryer...well, once he figured out what was wrong with theirs, of course...
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"Ahhhhhhhhhh-CHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The dancer jumped, startled from his light nap. Blinking the sleep from his eyes, he found the cause of the sound. Heechul had apparently decided to give cleaning a try. The only problem was, he must have switched the vacuum cleaner into reverse for a moment, because the redhead was standing, waving his hands frantically in front of him, where he was being attacked by a giant cloud of dirt.
"You turned it on reverse, Rella."
"No shit, Sherlock," he choked. Giving the evil machine a swift kick, Heechul stomped over to the couch and plopped down in a huff, dust flying off his body at the force. "I'm completely domestically retarded," the older man sulked.
"It's fine, Chullie," Hankyung said, placing an arm around the slighter man's shoulders.
The two sat there for a few until Heechul spoke up. "I'm sorry, Hannie."
"For what?"
"For ordering you around so much. I don't know how you do it."
"Well, it's never too late to learn, if you're up for it."
After a moment, Heechul leaned into the embrace, placing his head on the other's shoulder. "In a bit."
"Yeah. It can wait."
Pairing:Hanchul, plus ninja yehyuk(couldn't resist it...)
Rating:PG
Warning:Ummm...Heechul fending for himself...?
Summary:Even the most patient of people has a limit...
Disclaimer:...if I did, I would TOTALLY charge admission to Heechul doing half the things he does in this fic...
This is my birthday present for my yedongsaeng Kit Kat!!!...or my Dongsaeng Henry...hehehehe...depending on whether or not I'm rping at the moment...hehehehe...I hope you enjoy this, since it's my first ever hanchul, as well as my first time writing Heechul as a main...hehehehe
He was well known for his calm and gentle nature.
"Hannie, can you grab me a drink while you're in there?"
He was always able to stay calm in any given situation.
"Hannie?"
He was said to have the patience of a saint.
"Did you hear me?"
Nothing affected him.
"Hankyung!"
...but even he had his limits.
The loud slam of the pan startled Yesung and Eunhyuk, who had been too preoccupied with each other to notice the elder man's presence.
"Um, Hyung...?" Yesung tried as Eunhyuk placed a hand over his chest and tried to calm his racing heartbeat. "Are you okay?"
Hankyung wasn't given the chance to answer, as Heechul had apparently grown tired of yelling and opted for the direct approach.
"Didn't you hear me, Hannie?" Heechul asked, hip jutted out and hands on his narrow hips.
"I heard you."
"Then why didn't you answer me? I mean, it's only common courtesy."
Something lit in Hankyung's eyes that had Yesung gulping as he grabbed Eunhyuk's hand and slowly backed them out of the kitchen, Eunhyuk arguing the whole way.
"Courtesy?" the Chinese singer asked. "I'm in here cooking for you like I do everyday. Just a couple hours ago, I had done your laundry. Last night, I was your chauffer. Oh, and last week, I was even your bodyguard, and I'm pretty sure that I'm gonna have a scar from where that girl clawed my arm." Turning completely, Hankyung turned his full attention to Heechul, annoyance clear in his eyes. "I do more for you than I do for myself, so don't you even try to talk about courtesy with me. I doubt you could last two days without me at your beck and call."
The redhead stared at him for a moment before tilting his head in confusion. "You do realize that I don't speak Chinese, right?"
He blinked as he realized that he had been so aggravated that he'd unknowingly slipped into his mother language. Sighing, Hankyung started walking out of the room, but stopped in the doorway. "Shortened version? I'm not your slave. Do it yourself." That said, he walked out, leaving the for once speechless princess behind.
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Within the hour, everyone knew...Heechul was to fend for himself, without Hankyung's help. While the 'strike' startled some, like Leeteuk and Siwon, others such as Kangin, Eunhyuk, and Yesung were highly amused.
"About time, if you ask me, Hyung," Kangin had laughed as soon as he'd heard.
"Hey, Sung, wanna go out to eat?" Eunhyuk asked his lover once he's heard that Heechul was going to cook dinner.
"Traitors, the lot of you!" Heechul shouted as he stormed into the kitchen.
Hankyung simply turned the page of his book, smirk hidden by the pages.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Hannie, you have to stop him," Leeteuk begged that night. "I think he's trying to kill us."
"Worse than you?"
"Yes!! I may suck, but Heechul's a menace to society!!! His cooking could be classified as a weapon of mass destruction!"
"It can't be that bad, Teukkie."
Pursing his lips, he shoved the plate he'd carried in right in his face. "I knew you'd say that, so here's the proof. Try it."
"What is it?" the Chinese man asked, looking at the black and brown gelatinous blob on the plate in front of him.
"I have no idea, but I can assure you that he went in there trying to make miyeok guk..."
"...but miyeok guk is soup." He poked at the item on the plate. "It shouldn't be solid."
"It is...I just burn. He decimates."
Hankyung sighed, handing him the dish. "Did anyone eat it?"
"Are you crazy?!" the leader cried. "We don't have death wishes, you know!"
"Give me ten minutes, and I'll make something."
"I'll do it, Hannie Hyung!" Ryeowook chirped from the doorway. "You cook almost every night! Let me."
"You sure?" He nodded happily before running out of the room and into the kitchen, herding the others out.
As Heechul walked out, the 'I told you so' forming on his lips fell at the crestfallen expression that the older singer was trying to hide. Rising from the couch that he was curled up on, he walked over to Heechul and placed a hand on his shoulder.
"How about cooking lessons later on this week?" he asked, smiling reassuringly.
Heechul's lips curled into an ever so slight smile. "Yeah. Good plan."
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Hankyung walked out of his room to see Donghae and Eunhyuk carrying laundry bags toward the door, beanies and sunglasses in place.
"Where are you two going?"
"DBSK dorms," the pair stated.
"Why? We have a perfectly good washer and dryer here."
"Had," Donghae corrected.
"Had?"
"Had," Eunhyuk confirmed.
"Heechul?"
"Heechul."
He sighed. "See you in a bit."
Once the door closed, Hankyung went in search of Heechul, planning on showing him the ins and outs of working a washer and dryer...well, once he figured out what was wrong with theirs, of course...
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"Ahhhhhhhhhh-CHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The dancer jumped, startled from his light nap. Blinking the sleep from his eyes, he found the cause of the sound. Heechul had apparently decided to give cleaning a try. The only problem was, he must have switched the vacuum cleaner into reverse for a moment, because the redhead was standing, waving his hands frantically in front of him, where he was being attacked by a giant cloud of dirt.
"You turned it on reverse, Rella."
"No shit, Sherlock," he choked. Giving the evil machine a swift kick, Heechul stomped over to the couch and plopped down in a huff, dust flying off his body at the force. "I'm completely domestically retarded," the older man sulked.
"It's fine, Chullie," Hankyung said, placing an arm around the slighter man's shoulders.
The two sat there for a few until Heechul spoke up. "I'm sorry, Hannie."
"For what?"
"For ordering you around so much. I don't know how you do it."
"Well, it's never too late to learn, if you're up for it."
After a moment, Heechul leaned into the embrace, placing his head on the other's shoulder. "In a bit."
"Yeah. It can wait."
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Date: 2009-03-10 01:30 am (UTC)"Where are you two going?"
"DBSK dorms," the pair stated.
"Why? We have a perfectly good washer and dryer here."
"Had," Donghae corrected.
"Had?"
"Had," Eunhyuk confirmed.
"Heechul?"
"Heechul."
xDDDD
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Date: 2009-03-10 01:32 am (UTC)Thank you for the comment!!::hugs you::
Yay for being win!!!
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Date: 2009-03-10 01:44 am (UTC)this is an epic win and fail at the same time in all sense it can captured! and you made my dearest, cool an collected China man blows his top, was really amazing!! i do for once want to see that forever smiling angel would turn all red and puffy and trashing things around *laughs*
it's an enjoyable read and i love it ♥
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Date: 2009-03-10 01:50 am (UTC)Everyone has a limit...Hannie finally reached his...and he was calm about it, which scares me even more...well, minus the whole slamming the pan down, of course...^_^
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Date: 2009-03-10 02:06 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-10 01:31 pm (UTC)this is one of the rare fics that can make hanchul actually sound married XD love it!
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Date: 2009-03-10 05:29 pm (UTC)It just came out like that!!hehe...I was quite happy!!
Thanks for the comment!!
^_^
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Date: 2009-03-10 08:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-10 08:54 pm (UTC)SO TRUE!!!
Thank you for reading, and I'm glad that you liked it!!^_^
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Date: 2009-03-10 08:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-19 02:51 am (UTC)LOL. I love your disclaimers XD Their always amusing. I'm already interested about what Heechul's going to do...right now I should start reading XD
Yesung gulping as he grabbed Eunhyuk's hand and slowly backed them out of the kitchen, Eunhyuk arguing the whole way.
LOL. I can totally picture this XD Eunhyuk was probably the lost one, trying to figure out why he was being dragged away, while Yesung is the sensible one, because he can sense danger XD Wonder what's going to happen...
I doubt you could last two days without me at your beck and call."
Uh-oh Hannie doesn't seem to be really happy right now. Lol Heechul probably wouldn't last without Hankyung XD I wonder how he manages when he's in China *-)
"You do realize that I don't speak Chinese, right?"
LOOOOOOOL. Aweeeeeeeee Hannie *hugs him* In a lot of fics, people make him talk in Mandarin when he's in panic mode, or annoyed XD I can totally imagine him just ranting, and complaining with an annoyed/mad expression, and then there's Heechul sitting there like "right...what?" LOL. I love that part XD
"Shortened version? I'm not your slave. Do it yourself."
OoOoOoOoOoO Hankyung seems serious, lool he actually left Heechul. I would totally expect Heechul to start throwing a fit, or getting someone else [Siwon] to help him around with everything.
"Hey, Sung, wanna go out to eat?" Eunhyuk asked his lover once he's heard that Heechul was going to cook dinner.
LOOL OMG HEECHUL'S GOING TO COOK?! Hyuk was right to want to go out and eat XD A grumpy Heechul cooking is probably never a good thing, or Heechul cooking at all is probably not a good thing. He really is left to fend for himself isn't he. Aweeee poor Heechul!
"Traitors, the lot of you!" Heechul shouted as he stormed into the kitchen.
That just topped it off XD Heechul really is mad XD He definitely needs Hankyung's help XD
"Yes!! I may suck, but Heechul's a menace to society!!! His cooking could be classified as a weapon of mass destruction!"
POINT PROVEN! LOL TEUKIE! I love how he says that Heechul's cooking could be classified as a weapon of mass destruction XD I wonder how he really cooks *-)...don't think I would want to try it XD
"...but miyeok guk is soup."
LMAOOO. OH GAWD. I LOVE THIS! Hankyung would be like "WTF?" Can totally imagine his facial expression, he'd probably start laughing XD
& Wookie is always so helpful. And adorable, I could just hug him *____________* ... forever :D
"Had," Donghae corrected.
"Had?"
"Had," Eunhyuk confirmed.
"Heechul?"
"Heechul.".
LMAO. STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP. My stomach hurts from all the laughing XD I love how it was a statement then a question then back to a statement XD How does Heechul manage to break the laundry machine? XD
After a moment, Heechul leaned into the embrace, placing his head on the other's shoulder. "In a bit."
"Yeah. It can wait."
Aweeeeeee. This is a perfect ending for this fic ^-^ In conclusion Heechul needs Hankyung XD
I absolutely love this fic.
Adding to mem.
Your amazing :D
♥
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Date: 2009-03-19 03:06 am (UTC)you basically quoted back all my fave parts!!!hehehehe
I had far too much fun writing this for my friend...hehehehe
Memming it?!?!::snuggles you::
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Date: 2009-04-09 10:06 pm (UTC)chullie is just so funny. if i was hannie i would have gotten really mad and annoyed too. But one word I love it three to be exact!
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Date: 2009-04-09 10:09 pm (UTC)the side story just went up, so yay!!!
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Date: 2009-04-10 07:22 am (UTC)Poor boys though... They're suffering because of Chullie...
"What is it?" the Chinese man asked, looking at the black and brown gelatinous blob on the plate in front of him.
"I have no idea, but I can assure you that he went in there trying to make miyeok guk..."
"...but miyeok guk is soup." He poked at the item on the plate. "It shouldn't be solid."
"It is...I just burn. He decimates."
Hankyung sighed, handing him the dish. "Did anyone eat it?"
"Are you crazy?!" the leader cried. "We don't have death wishes, you know!" - Oh Teukie... You cracked me up real bad!!!!! XD He's right though... And seriously, Hannie... No one wants to die!!! XD
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Date: 2009-04-10 11:00 am (UTC)aw...but why does Teuk address Hannie as Hyung?
aH WELL, I liked this haha, like certain people's rebellious nature and other people's good nature~haha
and lmao at Hannie's shortened version!
and the YeHyuk lol but mwuahaha Eunhae lives~DBSK dorms...
or at least they're bff? haha
anyway~well done for a first HanChul!
Theme is often used but you wrote it good~
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Date: 2009-04-10 06:50 pm (UTC)...was total crack...
...and I loved every second of writing it...XDD
that was one of my fave scenes...that, and the laundry one...hehehehe
I hope that you'll read and enjoy the side story I wrote just as much!!!
Thank you again for the comment!!!!
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Date: 2009-04-10 06:58 pm (UTC)I'm glad that you liked it!!!
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Date: 2009-04-10 07:56 pm (UTC)Oh, it reminds me to a line of Eminem song's lyric.
They made it all up, there's no such thing:
femaleswith good looks who cooks and cleans.Isn't our Heenim just a perfect example of that saying? xD
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Date: 2009-04-10 08:03 pm (UTC)That's great...
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Date: 2009-04-10 08:42 pm (UTC)lol...no one noticed...haha
but yeah, it's uber cute!
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Date: 2009-04-11 06:05 am (UTC)Hankyung walked out of his room to see Donghae and Eunhyuk carrying laundry bags toward the door, beanies and sunglasses in place.
Hmm, I assume the beanies and sunglasses are so that they don't get mobbed on their way to do laundry?
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Date: 2009-04-11 06:06 am (UTC)and THAT is how it all starts...hehehehe
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Date: 2009-05-15 10:57 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-15 11:01 pm (UTC)